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Monday, March 6th 2006

4:51 PM (1361 days, 11h, 34min ago)

Chapter 15

  • What am i thinking about: Tomorrow
  • Am i in Love? with Crue Min?? Hopefully not!
  • Do i like someone? Yes
  • Am i feeling unwell? Jovial!!!

Ms. Miratone- The boarding school

15th Nov 2005

"Beck !Becca! clean the room upstairs!, you lazy girl!".How many times am i suppose to repeat! and you Xylia...why are you standing there...get back to your laundry...can't you just speed up a little? you still have other things to work!" What are you starring at Girls? go back to your readings!"

I heard this hard voice of a middle age women, as if she has a very high authority and extremely cruel. There was me and Crue Min, standing outside the gate of the boarding school. Waiting to be entertain by the doorman. We press the doorbell many times  but there seemed to be no answer so far. After a few minutes, the doorman open the gate for us to enter. He direct us to a very wide hall and later led us into another large room with long windows, curtains and bookshelves with books in them.

There I met with a lady, she looks contradictory to her looks from her nice and fine personality. This shows that we should never judge a book by it's cover. She looks very stern and I'll never dare to stand up next to her if I ever get a chance to do so. Anyway, Crue Min introduce me to the lady, she was ms Miratone, the person  that I've longed to meet up with. Just considering my sisters placement and everything that i need to know about my lost sister, and I just get to know that she just ran away from the school. I wondered where is huyen now, I went into my deep thoughts again...thinking about how nice it would be, to get Huyen back by my side.

Ms. Miratone, was kind enough to let us know. How Huyen was when she was there. She seems a little shakey of unsurety that makes me wondered if she is really telling the truth. Anyway she is the only source of information that I can get from so far, since, Huyen's frosters are already in another world.

Ms Miratone told us that she took care of Huyen very well and hence Huyen has not been a very plesant girl all the time because she wasnt well trained and she has not been bought up properly from a young girl. I was pretty sad to hear of it...that my yougest sister is a brat in the school but still I want her back because she is still my sister and nothing is going to seperate the bond between us. I told Ms Miratone if there are any news about Huyen, she had to refer Huyen back to me.

I was sitting in for lunch with a group of girls and i saw another two others serving food in their shabby clothes. They were treated like slaves. I can't believe my own eyes, are they paid to do those duty? I asked Ms Miratone about itand she told me that they are paid to do so as they are meant to be slaves and students are never allowed to talk to them.

I looked into their eyes, they looked very tearful about something. Something deep within their hearts seems to speak to me about something. Letting me know that it was God's direction to help this two little kids out of their poverty. I've been waiting to serve God in this ministry of helping child like this. They are force to work their lives through as slaves to get out of poverty. Poor girls....I'll try to ask Ms Miratone if she would allow me to.

Ms. Miratone, wasn't feeling very happy about my idea but she told me that she'll allow me to take care of them if I pay a very high sum of money. She told me the price that were a large sum of money but still affordable for my family. Even Huyen was sold for a much cheaper rate during my time. i realize that Ms. Miratone might be extremely money minded that she do not care about what others think of her.

I look at Crue Min and tried to discuss with him on the spot. There was a lot of money business going on and Crue Min and I sugested that we would take both kids and take care one for one. Since Crue Min agreed, we went to the court to get Becca and Xylia approved the next day. We did not wait any longer for Ms Miratone to approve it. This was because our sympathy towards the two girls help us make the desicion quick and jsut want them back in our security as soon as possible.

Crue Min and I, have the money to support this two girls and we know that very well. We will be responisible for everything for the two girls. We made ourselves promise each other and the girls that we'll adopt them into our family. They accepted us with a big hug and thank us with a large smile.

I'm glad that everything is going well. I wish to get Huyen back as soon as possible. Pray that the Lord would lead us there soon. Today was another blessed day and lovely day to work together with Crue Min. Hushin was at home resting again...because she has to stay home to take care of our meals and everything. It was great help though. Thanks Hushin. Goodbye nite....helllo tomorrow!

Can't wait for the next day.

4 webbie opinion.

Posted by Nienke:

This is fiction? It reads like a diary entry, lovely! Let me know when the next instalment is up!
Wednesday, March 8th 2006 @ 1:27 PM (1359 days, 14h, 58min ago)

Posted by Jayman:

I have to agree happily with Nienke...it does read like a dairy. The only suggestion I might add - and please don't think this as criticism - is maybe including a special activity to add to the mood you've already created. As an example, I was adopted at a fairly young age and the first thing my adopted parents did was take me out for ice cream. Or finding out that the two you adopted were actually born again Christians, which could be a good indication to anybody of the Creator's hand and blessing in bringing you together. Just my two cents worth. Hope you're having a great weekend buddy.o:)
Saturday, March 11th 2006 @ 4:51 PM (1356 days, 11h, 34min ago)

Posted by Kara Lennox:

Born again Christians? Where did that come from? As always, I'm very much enjoying the story, Marsha. I'm glad you always let me know when a new installment is up. Keep at it!
Sunday, March 12th 2006 @ 7:03 PM (1355 days, 9h, 22min ago)

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Friday, January 12th 2007 @ 6:14 PM (1049 days, 10h, 11min ago)

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