Huye Min in Uni

 

Aahh… I finally reach Uni, after the morning massive traffic jam. It’s only 8:30am. I think I have to grab something to bite. I haven’t taken my breakfast. Oh there is Huye Min, she is also in the canteen now. She look very upset over something, I can sense it without asking. She is the closest person to me, other than my 2^nd brother and youngest brother.

 

Hu Tien: Hey gal, what’s going on..?

Huye Min: Erm..nothing much, not a big deal. Remember I’ve promised to accompany you to New York? I can’t make it this time round because “jomo” (grandma) had asked me to help her with her housework. Due to her old age she can’t do everything by herself. As you know my parents are too busy with their business, they have no time for us at all.

Hu Tien: It is alright Huyemin, I understand your situation. Nevermind, I’ll remember to invite you the next time we go for a tour.

Huye Min: But my brother will still be going, because he needs to meet our uncle and cousins that are staying in New York.

Hu Tien: I’ll tell my dad to cancel one ticket then.

Huye Min: Thanks, Hu Tien and sorry that I can’t go searching for Huyen with you. My “hyeongje” will be helping you up. Don’t worry, at least there is a young man accompanying both you and your “jamae”. Just in case anything happens. Don’t look down on my twin’s ability he is very good in taekwando. (Huye Min giggled as she whispered about her elder twin Crue Min)

Hu Tien: Huye Min, I’m glad to see you giggling now and I don’t have to see you in your sad face. (I said smiling at her) Let’s go to the library now, as planned, we still have 50 mins left before our morning class starts.

 

So now Huye Min will not be able to make it. I wondered if I could clique well with her twin brother as we have not much similarity. Although, from the same course. Different from Huye Min, Crue Min is not so easy to relate to. He’s majoring in Journalism, he get a distinction for mandarin language for his finals last year and I haven’t sat down and talk to him before. That is why I’m getting a little worried that it’ll be a B.O.R.I.N.G trip without Huye Min and Jiunsi.  

 

Hutien, don’t worry; you’ll have a fun time in New York. Remember if you find Huyen then the trip will be an adventures one. The trip will be interesting if you want it to be. Go Hutien….you can make the trip nice. Crue Min is not bad after all; you can get to know your best friend’s brother better and stop doubting and assuming the way he lives. You can find it by yourself. This was how I assured myself.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

well.. the part where she said she cant accompany you to new york because she need help her granma with the chores..i think you have to give more solid reason as korea and new york kinda far and the excuse sound quite not right.. its not like you say u cant go sunway pyramid because your granma need help. We talking about two different states that separated by ocean, time, currency, culture etc... its needs preparation to travel, the way you write it as if you can reach new york in 20 minutes time. i think you have to make the character more resourceful as i believe that if she brave enough to go and search for her sister in New York (one of the biggest city) i guess its not necessary for her to be accompanied by someone that know martial arts, but someone that know their way around new york will be more useful, p/s: nowadays please note that new yorker carries weapon, so knowledge in taekwando does not guarantee the character safety. and if you want to search for someone in the new york city is almost impossible because the area is big and the population is high. the way you put it when you want to search for her as if new york is as big as the college compound. what about preparation, source, help, authority???

oh yup thx for the comments...i've been thinking of getting my facts right before i re-write it too...coz i have not enough background knowledge of the place...of both culture to write some thing like that =)...thank you for reminding me...will keep working for a better one =P...thank you yvonne.

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