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Wednesday, October 19th 2005

10:21 PM (1499 days, 7h, 2min ago)

ChaPTeR 3

Car ride to School

 

Jiunwei: ahh…finally we’re heading to school. Sorry to hurry you “jamae”, I hope I haven’t troubled you much because I am suppose to meet someone in school today.

Hutien: it’s alright it doesn’t matter, I’m rushing to university myself, don’t worry about me. It’ll always be better to be early. I’ll make sure I’ll be earlier the next time.

Hushan: Hyeongje, who are you planning to meet? Who is the mystery person that you’ve been meeting with recently? Is it a she or he?

Jiunwei blushing) erm…no…it isn’t a “so.nyeo”(girl in Korean)…erm alrite she is a “so.nyeo” but….we’re just friends and not more than that. Friends alright?

Hushan: Oh is that the “so.nyeo” that you’ve been eyeing at during sports day?

Jiunwei whole face turned as red as a tomato)

Hushan: alright, alright, it looks like someone is extremely embarrassed. You like her right “hyeongje”?

Jiunwei: never, we’re just friends. (Jiunwei denied)

Hushan: I believe you like her, just tell me the truth, I won’t tell anyone. I promised not to be a radio station of Raeys reporting to every individual of the family. (kidding)

Jiunwei: how can I believe you? You have always been a famous radio reporter of Raey family. I remembered when we’re both 7, you told everybody that a girl kissed me on the cheek.

Hushan: That was so many years back. “hyeongje”, please…. I promise I won’t okay?k? k? (asking him as Jiunwei looked out of the window, and did not bother about her pleas.)

 

After a few minutes

 

Hushan: Alright then, I’ll check out myself, since you don’t want to tell me. Huh. You’re such a terrible “hyeongje”.

Jiunwei just kept quiet ignoring her and looked a little dreamy)

 

I can’t believe that they are already in their teens. Although Hushan is much a baby compared to Jiunwei, I can’t believe that they are now 14. 3 more years and they’ll enter college life, just like me. Jiunwei liking someone is not something abnormal for young people their age. It is high time that they know about BGR, boy girl relationship and not fall in the trap of Pre-marital sex. Teenagers nowadays are much different from teenagers my time. We had more fun being in a group then being two by two. Anyway I trust both of them; nothing like this will happen to them if they think about our parents first.

 

Jiunwei: hey “jamae” careful, the light turns green already. Didn’t your instructor tell you not to write while you are driving?  You are scaring us with your driving already. I wonder how you pass your driving test. (in a kidding gesture)

Hutien: sorry ya guys? (feeling a little embarrassed)

Jiunwei: drive safely I don’t want anything to happen to my favorite “jamae”.

Hutien: alright, I will.

 

We reached school on time, Jiunwei hugged me. He is much taller compared to last time when I’m still in my secondary school days and him in his primary school days.

                                                                                                              

Have to hurry to Uni (University) now. The earliest class will be 10am. 1/2 an hour drive from here. It is just 7:45am now. I’ll be a little earlier today but good enough for me to check my mails and try to accomplish my assignments that will be due few days from now. Better get going. I’ve also told Huye Min that I’ll be meeting up with her in the library an hour before class starts.

                                                                                                                                    To Be Continued....

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Posted by Kara Lennox:

Hi, Hu Tien/Marcia. This is very cute. Technically there are a few problems (is this a script? Is this a short story?) but by starting off with dialogue and conflict, you've got the right idea. (And romance, gotta love any hint of romance.)
Wednesday, October 19th 2005 @ 3:08 PM (1499 days, 14h, 15min ago)

Posted by Helen:

If this is a beginning of a story, it is good! If it's not, curse for not having to get up before 7:45.... ^.^;
Thursday, October 20th 2005 @ 4:50 AM (1499 days, 0h, 33min ago)

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